"the rites of a pessimistic capitalist" (6-2-04)

By Buckwise McDickermeat


upright mounds looming over valleys,
shadows provoking a startling discourse,
breaking -- gesturing towards an unwed thought,
introspecting egocentric views of a crumbling metronome.

essentialism promoting a well deserved pat on the back
a well deserved status quo based on the status of show.
words are merely;
everything spoken is a lie.

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Copyright 2005 Buckwise McDickermeat
Published on Saturday, April 9, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Sin On Tuesday, January 16, 2007, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    this was brilliant ~kristy

  • AniDayz On Wednesday, April 13, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    damm impressive. as always, you amazer me. this one is exceptionally piercing...hitting a striking balance w/ ,y own beliefs, a wonderful+powerful piece.

  • Elise On Sunday, April 10, 2005, Elise (187)By person wrote:

    Short, to the point and while using a brain..men have those? Wow ^_^

  • Solace On Saturday, April 9, 2005, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    An interesting piece, it flows beautifully and speaks in volumes, well deserved? *smiles*

  • The Crimson Queen On Saturday, April 9, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    "everything spoken is a lie." aint that the fucking truth!!

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