Satan's Soul

By tormentedsoul666

Everythings changing,
Everyone's gone.
I put it behind me,
But now it seems wrong.
What would you do,
If you knew you were gonna die?
What would you do?
Would you scream and cry?
What if I told you,
I knew exactly how.
What would you do?
Would you want to know now?
What if I told you,
It was from Satan's hand.
That I knew exatcly how,
We would die in this land.
Would you believe me?
Or run away in fear?
What if I told you,
That he is right here.
What if I told you,
He lives in my soul.
What if I told you,
It's he who makes me whole.
What would you do,
If he showed himself?
What would you do,
If he came for yourself?
And what if he told you,
That I'm not who I am.
Would you believe him,
And take my hand?
Because it is he who makes me whole,
I am the one known as "Tormented Soul"

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Published on Sunday, March 27, 2005. Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Satan's Soul"

A former member wrote: i love it. :) t was amazing.
A former member wrote: I like this poem, and as everyone has already made clear, it has a great flow to it. I really loved how you ended it.
A former member wrote: I love it, It flows so well and the way it is written makes me think.
On Thursday, May 11, 2006, HalfDarkAngel (59) wrote:

absolutely amazing, much better than "a day in the life of satan"
On Friday, May 20, 2005, Serenity (469) wrote:

Great flow. And you do need to keep writing! You're work is awesome! :)
On Thursday, May 26, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74) wrote:

aww.. thanks, i'm kinda at a writer's block right now..so i'll update as soon as i get more poetry written
A former member wrote: Excellent poem. Very wine flowing. It was fucking awesome. You need to keep writing dude!
On Monday, May 16, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74) wrote:

thanks, i will keep up on my poetry too, thanks for the support!!
On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, Dark_Goddess (13) wrote:

Good poem, flowed nicely.
On Thursday, April 21, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74) wrote:

thank you, i like flowing poetry i think its more of a challenge to find words that rhyme and go with what your trying to say.
On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74) wrote:

i like the last lines too, thats where i came up with my name, lol
On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, Saint_Reaper (200) wrote:

last two lines i liked the most....great job, keep it up