Gone

By tormentedsoul666

I wake up in the morning,
To chaos and pain.
With all these things happening,
It's driving me insane.
I want to go away,
Or at least be numb to it all.
So that when it comes,
I won't be harmed by the fall.
But it's too late for that now,
I fall and I weep.
Why does this cliff,
Seem so very steep?
It wasn't like this,
Before when I came here.
So I sit and cry,
And let fall my tears.
Before, behind me,
Stood an angel of Hope.
But now going through this,
SHe could not cope.
She left, and she cried,
As she walked away.
She has not come back,
Still to this very day.
So now I must stand it,
In a way I can't face.
But as I think about it,
It all falls into place.
I must follow her path,
Of the one who could not cope.
I am gone now,
No faith and no hope.

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Copyright 2005 tormentedsoul666
Published on Sunday, March 27, 2005.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • tormentedsoul666 On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74)By person wrote:

    *blushes* thanks, i try to use words in a way that i haven't seen used before.

  • Saint_Reaper On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, Saint_Reaper (200)By person wrote:

    i agree with the queen....you have a way with words, i love it

  • tormentedsoul666 On Sunday, March 27, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74)By person wrote:

    yes that is my fav line from this whole poem glad someone else likes it too!

  • The Crimson Queen On Sunday, March 27, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    "I am gone now, No faith and no hope." thats such a good yet depressing line...i likes

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