You

By BlackRose13

All I ever did
was care about you,
all YOU ever did
was hurt me.

You kissed me,
you fucked me,
you left me.

You said you loved me,
and you lied.
You are gone,
and if not I am.

I´m dying
and blaming
YOU for that.

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Copyright 2005 BlackRose13
Published on Thursday, March 17, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Forgotten Angel On Thursday, March 17, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309)By person wrote:

    heh...been there..except 1 part..and great poem, i can feel the anger in it! -Kel

  • whisperer On Thursday, March 17, 2005, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    been there fuck that nicely done...-]darkness[-

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, March 17, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    know how ya feel...nice write

  • happilydepressed On Thursday, March 17, 2005, happilydepressed (400)By person wrote:

    good write

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