[x]Last a Lifetime[x][this is my last breath]

By murder_in_clubland

I can feel your eyes upon me

lingering on my neck

Living longer then forever

Just to smell your scent

And sometimes forever is just too long

and i cant take it anymore

I come to your door,wrist slit[in hand]

And I want to break.

break down in your arms,please let me cry

a

few

more

tears

please.

And just hold me.

Tell me everythings gonna be alright

I can hear your voice now

Everythings going to be okay...

And I love you.

I just love you so much.

Please just let me love you...

Maybe love just isn't enough.

















































































Let me break down in your arms

[but maybe love just isn't enough]

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Copyright 2005 no love for a girl like me
Published on Tuesday, March 8, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: wow this brings with it emotion that is often untouched thank you

  • The Crimson Queen On Tuesday, March 8, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    wow...this cuts deep..but really, love isnt enough, it needs to be a lot more then just that to make anything work..and FYI:there is still love out there for a girl like you..~AoD

  • murder_in_clubland On Tuesday, March 8, 2005, murder_in_clubland (384)By person wrote:

    hah! thanks I was starting to lose hope.

  • The Crimson Queen On Tuesday, March 8, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    never give up hope, its one of the worst things you can do to yourself..

  • Sin On Tuesday, March 8, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    so sad and painful...

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