Neon

By Silent_Raven

I’m quaking,
Burning
FEELING
With every atom in me,
Quivering;
I am electricity-
Crackling, sizzling, flowing
Transforming, shining
Buzzing-
I am electricity, I am Light
Burning through you,
Burning through me.
I am fire-water,
Dancing in your mouth;
In you, in me.
Just being near you
Lights me up,
Strikes an inner match
And burns my soul,
Fire within,
You touch me
From the inside out
With just one look…
You’re opium, morphine-
I drink you in
And you fill me,
Drug me
Send me soaring,
Numb and burning;
I am writhing
Inside,
Begging,
Tearing myself up.
You drive me insane-
I’m screaming
For you, for you.
I cry out in the silence
My insides are yearning,
I’m crying for you.
You melt me
With one look
One touch
One brush of your
Dream-scaping lips-
You fill me up
So quick,
My soul is overflowing.

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Copyright 2005 Silent_Raven
Published on Sunday, February 6, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • CrOsSeD N BoUnD On Monday, February 7, 2005, CrOsSeD N BoUnD (45)By person wrote:

    Confuckingfusing but once ya figure it out. . . brilliant.

  • The Crimson Queen On Sunday, February 6, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    spectacular use of metaphors...

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