Heartless Gold

By Krusifire

You were mine.
A heartless glowing prize.
You were so defined.
Till something caught my eye.
A crater in my mind.
A force to end our lives.
So vicious and unkind.
You burned me deep inside.
Heartless Gold.
You robbed my soul.

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Copyright 2005 Krusifire
Published on Saturday, January 29, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • The Crimson Queen On Friday, February 11, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    short yet powerful..and CBT is right, you definately have talent..never stop writing..

  • island warrior On Saturday, January 29, 2005, island warrior (210)By person wrote:

    Very well written. I'm sure many people will be able to relate to this one.

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