True $#%@# Love
By HiImFromJupiter
False emotions fake words
Lame excuses I've already heard
Disgusting little lies you tell
But you'll be sorry yes you will
Cuz when it's all said and done
You'll know I wasn't quite so dumb
Just picky about the battles I choose
That's why I never lose
And most not even worth the time
We wasted both yours and mine
Still you don't even realize
It's you that's hurt by all your lies
And those who played this game with you
Will do you the same and be untrue
Then you'll wonder what went wrong
Cuz it's all over and their long gone
This game you played and thought such fun
Wasn't what you thought now that it's all done
And what's to show for all of this
Both our lives one big mess
The relationship that we once had
The loving and caring since gone bad
At least I know who I am
But you my friend will stay the same
And you will make the same mistakes
Over and Over your heart will break
So go your way and I'll go mine
Hope you have a real good time
Comments on "True $#%@# Love"
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On Saturday, March 12, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
you have captured my absolute feeling for people who play such PATHETIC games for their obvious lack of personality....deep down they can't hide from the fact that they are terminally lonely....written with a lot of heart:) elisa
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On Saturday, January 22, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
ah yesss...relative to my past situations...spoken in rhyme.[such repetitive rhyme scheme...keeps the ball rolling throught the entire piece]. a job well done+much appreciated.
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A former member wrote:
..memories.. I liked this quite a bit. Hits a little close to home.. Good work.. :) --beautiful
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On Saturday, January 22, 2005, Dei
(663) wrote:
this one rings true to me. i hear ya! keep up the good work!
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On Saturday, January 22, 2005, HiImFromJupiter
(11) wrote:
Your feedback is much appreciated!!
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On Saturday, January 22, 2005, Dei
(663) wrote:
well your just full of poetry aren't you. This was good. usually i like quoting my fav stanza in here... but like them all!