True $#%@# Love

By HiImFromJupiter

False emotions fake words
Lame excuses I've already heard

Disgusting little lies you tell
But you'll be sorry yes you will

Cuz when it's all said and done
You'll know I wasn't quite so dumb

Just picky about the battles I choose
That's why I never lose

And most not even worth the time
We wasted both yours and mine

Still you don't even realize
It's you that's hurt by all your lies

And those who played this game with you
Will do you the same and be untrue

Then you'll wonder what went wrong
Cuz it's all over and their long gone

This game you played and thought such fun
Wasn't what you thought now that it's all done

And what's to show for all of this
Both our lives one big mess

The relationship that we once had
The loving and caring since gone bad

At least I know who I am
But you my friend will stay the same

And you will make the same mistakes
Over and Over your heart will break

So go your way and I'll go mine
Hope you have a real good time

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Copyright 2005 HiImFromJupiter
Published on Saturday, January 22, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • elisa On Saturday, March 12, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    you have captured my absolute feeling for people who play such PATHETIC games for their obvious lack of personality....deep down they can't hide from the fact that they are terminally lonely....written with a lot of heart:) elisa

  • AniDayz On Saturday, January 22, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    ah yesss...relative to my past situations...spoken in rhyme.[such repetitive rhyme scheme...keeps the ball rolling throught the entire piece]. a job well done+much appreciated.

  • A former member wrote: ..memories.. I liked this quite a bit. Hits a little close to home.. Good work.. :) --beautiful

  • Dei On Saturday, January 22, 2005, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    this one rings true to me. i hear ya! keep up the good work!

  • HiImFromJupiter On Saturday, January 22, 2005, HiImFromJupiter (11)By person wrote:

    Your feedback is much appreciated!!

  • Dei On Saturday, January 22, 2005, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    well your just full of poetry aren't you. This was good. usually i like quoting my fav stanza in here... but like them all!

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