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The One
By cgracewrite
As soon as we met I knew you were the one
You had the bluest eyes I had ever seen
Your eyes were as bright as the stars in the night
A window to your soul, so I thought.
I would have given anything to win your heart.
I thought I did.
You were so attentive, such a gentleman.
I never guessed that you were ashamed of me for being sick; it was the
luck of the draw.
No one ever promised us life would be fair.
It could have been you, not me
And still I would have loved you.
I found a glacier in the spot where your heart should have been.
How was I supposed to know that you expected me to be ashamed of myself?
How was I supposed to know that you were ashamed of me as well?
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Copyright 2005 cgracewrite
Published on Saturday, January 15, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "The One"
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A former member wrote:
i can so relate to this! great write
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On Sunday, January 16, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918)
wrote:
this world is such a hateful place... Amazing Write!!
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On Saturday, January 15, 2005, Stormcomin
(32) wrote:
I agree with purr...very painful write that summons anger and disgust that a lot of us know all too well. Great write!
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On Saturday, January 15, 2005, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
that second-last line is horrible in its painfulness. this aches; and i'm angry at the protagonist even though i do not know him... Powerful write.
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