When the Love Ends

By cgracewrite

I drink a little too much,
I drive a little too fast,
I go at a maddening pace
I pretend that it is taking his place.
But what else can I do
At the end when the love affair's through?
At the end of his love.
I pretend this is all taking his place.
I'm reckless it's true,
But what else can I do?
At the end of the love affair.

I talk a little too much
And I laugh a little too much
My voice is too loud when I am out in a crowd
But I need for people to stare.
Do they know, do they care?
That it's only that I'm lonely.
The smile on my face
Isn't really a smile at all.
It's just masking my pain
But what else can I do at the end of love?










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Copyright 2005 cgracewrite
Published on Saturday, January 15, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • CrOsSeD N BoUnD On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, CrOsSeD N BoUnD (45)By person wrote:

    i remember when i lost my relationship. . . i resorted to drugs and alcohol, now im a fucking dropout.. beautiful write. . .

  • The Crimson Queen On Sunday, January 16, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    I have been here many times, done these same things. great write! we all do this!

  • K_Love On Saturday, January 15, 2005, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    *nods* I felt like I was reading a book about myself in stanza 2, hard hitting indeed, very moving write. I liked your style. Great job.

  • purr_verse On Saturday, January 15, 2005, purr_verse (1057)By person wrote:

    ow. honest, hard-hitting, effective write. well-realised and well-expressed piece.

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