chrysanthemum tears
By dropsofhate
She spilled out to me
onto a white canvas,
where I could see her every color.
She says she dreams of flying,
and falling down for miles.
I promise to sing your nightmares away.
I promise to catch you,
and kiss your tears away.
she spilled out to me.
shes silky soft milky skin that my
finger tips could barely reach.
she says she dreams of us.
we are smiling so happy.
She dreams of flying,
and falling down for miles.
I promise to sing your nightmares away.
I promise to catch you.
I promise,
I will turn your tears into chrysanthemum petals.
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Copyright 2005 dropsofhate
Published on Monday, January 10, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, January 21, 2005, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
Nice, imaginative write
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On Wednesday, January 19, 2005, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
so beautiful and sweet....warms my black heart
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_
(69) wrote:
I love your writings and I hope to see more of them!--Steph
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, dropsofhate
(45) wrote:
that is so wonderful to hear. and i am going to post more. ♥
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A former member wrote:
"She says she dreams of flying, and falling down for miles." This line made me giddy. Welcome to Dp.
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, dropsofhate
(45) wrote:
im very glad. thank you. ♥
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On Monday, January 10, 2005, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
gentle, beautiful write, with lovely evocative formatting to enrich its words. many welcomes indeed - this is gorgeous.
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, dropsofhate
(45) wrote:
thank you very much. i put alot into this one. there is actually alot of meaning to it most people wont get, just because its more of a personal one. I wrote it for my love. thank you again. ♥
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On Monday, January 10, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
ohh wow.. this was brilliant work. I really enjoyed reading this, the beauty of your words flowed nicely together. Thank you for this great job. Yes, Welcome to DP.
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, dropsofhate
(45) wrote:
thank you very much. ♥
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On Monday, January 10, 2005, StAinedNblood
(27) wrote:
This is beautiful...OMG, you have a talent to write. Awesome job!!!
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, dropsofhate
(45) wrote:
♥
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On Monday, January 10, 2005, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
This write offers the feeling of safety conveyed by a lover's arms... beautifully done, and welcome to DP!
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, dropsofhate
(45) wrote:
im so glad it brings to you such feeling. ♥