chrysanthemum tears

By dropsofhate

She spilled out to me
onto a white canvas,
where I could see her every color.

She says she dreams of flying,
and falling down for miles.

I promise to sing your nightmares away.
I promise to catch you,
and kiss your tears away.

she spilled out to me.
shes silky soft milky skin that my
finger tips could barely reach.

she says she dreams of us.
we are smiling so happy.

She dreams of flying,
and falling down for miles.

I promise to sing your nightmares away.
I promise to catch you.

I promise,
I will turn your tears into chrysanthemum petals.


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Copyright 2005 dropsofhate
Published on Monday, January 10, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • BoldSolitude On Friday, January 21, 2005, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    Nice, imaginative write

  • Blood of Winter On Wednesday, January 19, 2005, Blood of Winter (296)By person wrote:

    so beautiful and sweet....warms my black heart

  • Black_Cherry_Doll_ On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (69)By person wrote:

    I love your writings and I hope to see more of them!--Steph

  • dropsofhate On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, dropsofhate (45)By person wrote:

    that is so wonderful to hear. and i am going to post more. ♥

  • A former member wrote: "She says she dreams of flying, and falling down for miles." This line made me giddy. Welcome to Dp.

  • dropsofhate On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, dropsofhate (45)By person wrote:

    im very glad. thank you. ♥

  • purr_verse On Monday, January 10, 2005, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    gentle, beautiful write, with lovely evocative formatting to enrich its words. many welcomes indeed - this is gorgeous.

  • dropsofhate On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, dropsofhate (45)By person wrote:

    thank you very much. i put alot into this one. there is actually alot of meaning to it most people wont get, just because its more of a personal one. I wrote it for my love. thank you again. ♥

  • K_Love On Monday, January 10, 2005, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    ohh wow.. this was brilliant work. I really enjoyed reading this, the beauty of your words flowed nicely together. Thank you for this great job. Yes, Welcome to DP.

  • dropsofhate On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, dropsofhate (45)By person wrote:

    thank you very much. ♥

  • StAinedNblood On Monday, January 10, 2005, StAinedNblood (27)By person wrote:

    This is beautiful...OMG, you have a talent to write. Awesome job!!!

  • dropsofhate On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, dropsofhate (45)By person wrote:

    ♥

  • stormtalk On Monday, January 10, 2005, stormtalk (729)By person wrote:

    This write offers the feeling of safety conveyed by a lover's arms... beautifully done, and welcome to DP!

  • dropsofhate On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, dropsofhate (45)By person wrote:

    im so glad it brings to you such feeling. ♥

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