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~Random Writing...~
By Daegonna
These Are A Couple Of Poems I Started And Never Finished Cuz I Don't Know
How They Should Keep Going... Sad Huh? If Anyone Has Any Suggestions DP
Mail Me... I'd REALLY Apprieciate It...
1.: Sometimes I Feel Like I'm Gone...
FOREVER
Others I Couldn't Be
Closer To The Ground
Sometimes I Couldn't Be Without You
I'd Give Anything To Be With You For One Night
Then...
I'd Be Happy Forever
2.: Sometimes I Tell Myself What I Wrote About You Was Bullshit
But Then I Realize That I Was Lying To Myself All Along
I Wanted It To FEEL True...
But It Never Did...
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Copyright 2004 Daegonna
Published on Monday, November 29, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, April 17, 2005, lonelygurl
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wrote:
i feel this poem to my core its excellent....good write
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A former member wrote:
Very well written, unique and distinguished.."I'd Give Anything To Be With You For One Night Then... I'd Be Happy Forever". I love this line with every breath . . every heart-beat. Beautiful.
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On Wednesday, December 8, 2004, Whisper
(112) wrote:
Nice, I loved them. Why can't you finish them. ~Matt~
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A former member wrote:
Very well done.
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