~Random Writing...~

By Daegonna

These Are A Couple Of Poems I Started And Never Finished Cuz I Don't Know How They Should Keep Going... Sad Huh? If Anyone Has Any Suggestions DP Mail Me... I'd REALLY Apprieciate It...

1.: Sometimes I Feel Like I'm Gone...
FOREVER
Others I Couldn't Be
Closer To The Ground
Sometimes I Couldn't Be Without You
I'd Give Anything To Be With You For One Night
Then...
I'd Be Happy Forever

2.: Sometimes I Tell Myself What I Wrote About You Was Bullshit
But Then I Realize That I Was Lying To Myself All Along
I Wanted It To FEEL True...
But It Never Did...

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Copyright 2004 Daegonna
Published on Monday, November 29, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • lonelygurl On Sunday, April 17, 2005, lonelygurl (5)By person wrote:

    i feel this poem to my core its excellent....good write

  • A former member wrote: Very well written, unique and distinguished.."I'd Give Anything To Be With You For One Night Then... I'd Be Happy Forever". I love this line with every breath . . every heart-beat. Beautiful.

  • Whisper On Wednesday, December 8, 2004, Whisper (112)By person wrote:

    Nice, I loved them. Why can't you finish them. ~Matt~

  • A former member wrote: Very well done.

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