Angel on my wall

By Bleeding Tree

I look at the angel on my wall

It's staring back at me

She tells me someday the lord will call

And all believers he will free

But what about the others I say

Will they be joining us someday

A sad look crossed her face

And immediatly I knew the case

My daddy would have to stay behind

And I will lose what once was mine

I became angry and looked away


Why save some while others stay?...

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Copyright 2004 Bleeding Tree
Published on Friday, November 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Interesting concept, and very well written.

  • A former member wrote: very cool

  • A former member wrote: Wow..... Amazing I love this one best yet! I really like this poem! And the question at the end was perfect! You’re a great writer!

  • blue On Tuesday, November 30, 2004, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    I concur, ~B

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