75
By darkleprechaun
are you out there?
i can feel you, the real you.
the part you keep chained up behind locked metal doors.
we met once....
in a dream...
your hair blowing in the non-existant wind,
your dress as still and beautiful as death.
i can remember our embrace, your skin as cool and pale as porcealine,
and your face more striking than a lunar eclipse.
when we embraced t'was such bliss... i think... dream...
and search to again recapture our passionate kiss.
i only wish for your cold to again burn it's way inside all
my pours, your empty hunger to again engulf my being...
if only i could find you ...
but alas i must settle for empty dreams
and fantasies of bluish obsidian
in the hopes of recreating something that may have never happened...
so now i understand my dark angel, you were sent to me for only a moment
in time for a reason... inspiration? NO! a goal? NO! torture,
someone sent you to me to fill my being to the point of bursting of empty,
sadly though now i cherish this, i love it... please come back
to me.
my bright darkness please again show me what i long for... please.
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Comments on "75"
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A former member wrote:
I can definitely relate to this one. I've had dreams that were so good, then when I woke up, I felt really bad from longing for that dream to be reality. Very well written. Much longing in this one, just as I would had.
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On Saturday, December 4, 2004, whisperer
(166) wrote:
youre becoming quite popular, with work like this why would i expect any less? -]darkness[-
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Sin
(1135) wrote:
this was so dark and lovely..such longing it makes the heart ache...wonderful write ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
good job
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A former member wrote:
Wonderful
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, darkleprechaun
(56) wrote:
thank you till_death... i like your stuff as well is very nice
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, Grey Lies
(185) wrote:
wonderful...good job
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A former member wrote:
"work in progress"...cant wait to read it when its all done
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A former member wrote:
great write
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A former member wrote:
awesome write.
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, blue
(1409) wrote:
great start, curious title.