75

By darkleprechaun

are you out there?
i can feel you, the real you.
the part you keep chained up behind locked metal doors.

we met once....

in a dream...

your hair blowing in the non-existant wind,
your dress as still and beautiful as death.
i can remember our embrace, your skin as cool and pale as porcealine,
and your face more striking than a lunar eclipse.
when we embraced t'was such bliss... i think... dream...
and search to again recapture our passionate kiss.
i only wish for your cold to again burn it's way inside all
my pours, your empty hunger to again engulf my being...
if only i could find you ...

but alas i must settle for empty dreams
and fantasies of bluish obsidian
in the hopes of recreating something that may have never happened...


so now i understand my dark angel, you were sent to me for only a moment
in time for a reason... inspiration? NO! a goal? NO! torture,
someone sent you to me to fill my being to the point of bursting of empty,
sadly though now i cherish this, i love it... please come back
to me.

my bright darkness please again show me what i long for... please.

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Copyright 2004 uglybutpsychothingsevenout
Published on Friday, November 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Rant"
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  • A former member wrote: I can definitely relate to this one. I've had dreams that were so good, then when I woke up, I felt really bad from longing for that dream to be reality. Very well written. Much longing in this one, just as I would had.

  • whisperer On Saturday, December 4, 2004, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    youre becoming quite popular, with work like this why would i expect any less? -]darkness[-

  • Sin On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    this was so dark and lovely..such longing it makes the heart ache...wonderful write ~kristy

  • A former member wrote: good job

  • A former member wrote: Wonderful

  • darkleprechaun On Friday, November 26, 2004, darkleprechaun (56)By person wrote:

    thank you till_death... i like your stuff as well is very nice

  • Grey Lies On Friday, November 26, 2004, Grey Lies (185)By person wrote:

    wonderful...good job

  • A former member wrote: "work in progress"...cant wait to read it when its all done

  • A former member wrote: great write

  • A former member wrote: awesome write.

  • blue On Friday, November 26, 2004, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    great start, curious title.

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