The Dark Company

By Silverspider

Twilight
A fat moon rising
Over a steaming swamp.
Twisted trees
Claw the black earth
Pale lights flicker
Deep below the surface
Of still, dark waters.

Tremulous ripples
Faint thunder rising
Muffled echos
Hooves striking earth
Sharp sounds of splashing.

Dark horses run
Sweat-slicked, snorting
Shadow riders, crouching low
Urge them onward
Churning the earth
Under a moon gone red.

Hoofprints slowly fill with water
Once the dark company has passed.

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Copyright 2004 Silverspider
Published on Thursday, November 25, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Ravenblade On Wednesday, January 26, 2005, Ravenblade (313)By person wrote:

    Very nicely written, some great imagery here...I look forward to seeing more in the future...>Raven

  • A former member wrote: very strong imagery nice write

  • A former member wrote: wow i could see that all in my mind like it was right in front of me. well done

  • BeautifulCalamity On Friday, November 26, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    strong imagery, something about this really stood out to me. nicely written..

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