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Life
By Jewelnique
Downward spirals, circles and spheres
Interlocking angles…falling fear
Chaotic psychotic black holes of life
Sucked through the atmospheric vacuum so blue
Spinning life spirals
Depression and mourn
Do tumble and fumble
Into the motionless ocean of nothing
Blood shed bursting so bright
Negligent violence accepted so norm
Adolescent minds do warp and swarm
Into a future so doomed never to bloom
Head on collisions
Of dreams and visions
Hopeful realities
Heart set casualties
Social influence
Torpedoed ignorance
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Copyright 2004 Jewelnique
Published on Tuesday, November 23, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, November 29, 2004, blue
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wrote:
I...really liked how it ended. I like it,yup! b
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On Tuesday, November 23, 2004, Kali Ma
(43) wrote:
I like this poem, though the end doesn't seem very final. Instead of a nice tying up of the poem, it just stops. Perhaps that is the effect you were going for, but I just thought to mention. Good word choice, and powerful images. ~ Kali Ma
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