~R e v i v e~

By Krusifire

I resent this existence.
Which we display.
Mans stupidity.
Is destined to alter the way.
In this world of depression.
Joy turns to saddness.
Limits our horizons.
Hinders all progress.

~R e v i v e~

Life is so demeaning.
I feel inferior.
Who are we to cast stones.
At our creator.
We must all live again.
We've been deprived.
To see a better day.
But that times not yet arrived.

~R e v i v e~













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Copyright 2004 Krusifire
Published on Friday, November 12, 2004.     Filed under: "Lyrics"
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  • Full blame On Friday, November 26, 2004, Full blame (28)By person wrote:

    the form...each brick [each line] grates my arm

  • Zhee On Friday, November 12, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    this was coool! would make an awesome song!

  • Sleepwalker On Friday, November 12, 2004, Sleepwalker (15)By person wrote:

    very thought provoking...excellent

  • Sin On Friday, November 12, 2004, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    short, sweet, and full of truth, and it flowed wonderfully. nice write ~kristy

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