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Invisible yet Alive
By ThoughtsOthoughts
I really hate this
Walking among any sort of crowd
Everyone has their "walking" buddy
But I am the oddball left
No one wants to be my friend
Or understand where I am from
I am told how insignificant I am as I pass by
Four people walk right into after that comment
How in the world did they not see me
I have fat on my body and my skin is dark
I do not blend into my backgrounds and I know i am loud
So all i can do is brush off these nasty looks
And pretend it was I who walked into them
This moment proves that i am very much invisible
Yet I am very much alive.
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Copyright 2004 ThoughtsOthoughts
Published on Tuesday, November 2, 2004.
Filed under:
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, knightmirror
(426)
wrote:
wow.....i have felt like this often....never once have i tried to explain it.....nor could i have done it as good as you...****-knight
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On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
Being invisable to people can sometimes hurt more than their nasty looks. looks atleast admit your existence... great job! ~s
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A former member wrote:
poor thing :( we've all been there though (i mean everyone here at DP.com) good write and very nice expression of the situation
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On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
I get this same feeling when I am in the mall.. what a place of horrors.. Keep your head up and remember.. freaks rule.. and mystic has good advice as well lol. -Michael
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On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
P.S. welcome to Dp.. hope you find a home here.. -Michael
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On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, ThoughtsOthoughts
(14) wrote:
thanks for the welcome...haha definitely like mystic's advice...it happens everywhere which really gets to me...but oh well...oh i know freaks rulE!
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On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
ouch! next time kick them bastards in the ass as they walk by!!
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On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, ThoughtsOthoughts
(14) wrote:
Ill definitely make sure they get one in the ass
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