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Skipping fifth hour and lonely
By agentlemenspromise
I swallowed a razorblade yesterday
It synonymous to how you tear me up inside
And I tore out my diaphragm
I can’t breathe around you anymore
You tore apart my composure
So for giving you my all I fell apart
Ill forgive you for carving another ventricle out of my heart
I want to bite the corners of your lips
And let you fall in love with my fingertips
There’s a line of symmetry between you and me
It separates where I am and where I wana be
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Copyright 2004 agentlemenspromise
Published on Monday, October 25, 2004.
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"Poetry"
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On Saturday, April 18, 2020, carlosjackal
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wrote:
This was strong, strong heavyweight stuff. Magnificent.
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A former member wrote:
There’s a line of symmetry between you and me
It separates where I am and where I wana be..i just loved that
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On Thursday, November 11, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
This is great...I loved the razorblade part...You just mirror my own feelings to me so well I don't know what to say half of the time.
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A former member wrote:
This is unique. . it was the perfect length with the perfect amount of vicious, vehement emotion. Confined brilliance. ~ Rose.
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A former member wrote:
Vicious.. I love this, so bitter. ~Wish Upon A Star
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On Monday, October 25, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
Whoa! Agree with Zhee, the way you expressed yourself sometimes were very original. I especially liked the last bit.. -S
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On Monday, October 25, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this was nicely done.. i loved some of the expressions you used here.. good work!
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