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Broken Soul Forgotten Eyes- Another Piece OF Mind.
By thinevoicetragic
These thoughts I write.
Another Piece of Mind.
All the confusion in my life.
I'm Dead Inside.
Cold Hearted.
Cold Blooded.
Broken soul Forgotten Eyes.
Shattered Smile.
Empty Reality, full of hate.
Nothing to give, Everything to take.
I dream these dreams and sometimes it feels as if
I wont awake.
I wish someone else could take my place.
My life is a constant tragedy.
The hatred tangled up inside.
Darkness overwhelms my mind.
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Copyright 2004 thinevoicetragic
Published on Sunday, October 24, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, April 30, 2005, The Crimson Queen
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wrote:
fabulously written, and i can entirely relate as well..yet again
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A former member wrote:
just had to read this again...
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On Tuesday, October 26, 2004, stuart_pid
(135) wrote:
very intense write, powerful and sad. makes me want to give you a hug.
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A former member wrote:
Damn girl, we must be of the same blood...I've written almost these exact words myself... you're not alone...even if you feel you are
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On Monday, October 25, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this conveyed so much... lovely work!
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A former member wrote:
Excellent write. I loved it.
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