Inside You

By thinevoicetragic

I can see inside you fine..
The hate you hold inside.
I can read between the lines.
If you don't want me in your life
just tell me to go
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I can see it in your eyes.
I'm not completely blind.
make me feel guilty to the obligation you hold inside for me.

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Copyright 2004 thinevoicetragic
Published on Saturday, October 23, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • The Crimson Queen On Saturday, April 30, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    this is a feeling i know as well..

  • Zhee On Monday, October 25, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    the bitterness was portrayed wonderfully here...nicely done...

  • A former member wrote: reading between the lines is a useful skill to have :)

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