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God?
By MyScarsStillBleed
Maybe God doesn't love us
I guess it's not that bad
Maybe he hates all his people
We're the worst idea he had
Maybe he made a mistake
One he can't take back
Mabye God is the Devil
Or his heart is just as black
Maybe God doesn't know me
Or really even care
Maybe God doesn't love us
Or he's not even there
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Copyright 2004 MyScarsStillBleed
Published on Thursday, October 14, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
The true name of the God to which we associate with, YahWeh, translates into I AM. I AM God. YOU ARE God. Religion confuses things like this so simpler people who wish to know God are forced to believe they need a medium to do so.
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A former member wrote:
I apologize if voicing my opinion in light of your concept offended; it was not my aim. At this day, in this age... The doubt, due to a systematic failure of organized religion, cannot be shaken. Well written, thank you for the thought and inspiration
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On Sunday, October 24, 2004, xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx
(36)
wrote:
You completely describe my concept of life *Hugs and kisses*
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On Thursday, October 14, 2004, Soulseeker
(108) wrote:
Or maybe you shouldn't say maybe... you should erase maybe entirely and take logic or philosophy! Bethany
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A former member wrote:
Or maybe "scars" is just useing poetic expression...though I normaly do not like repitition in poems, I thought didn't think that the maybes were overused...In fact I think they added to the statement of uncertainty in faith that is being expressed in thi
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A former member wrote:
this poem
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