Erotic Pleasure

By DarkPaladine

On the bed she is tied down,with thousand of candles
burning all around.
Her hands are chained down by her side,her undressed
body she can not hide.
Over her eyes a blind fold has been placed and that
brought darkness into this place.
From side to side her head would whip as small drops
of hot wax on her would drip.
The heat would bring small amounts of pain but not
enough to drive her insane.
Her feet to the bed were also tied so that she could
not run away and hide.
Small kiss's he would plant on her lips and neck
while hot wax apon her tummy and breast would
stick.
Each time the wax would hit,a gasp of surprize
from her lips would slip.
And ever so slowly to still her cries he would
take his hand and stroke her thighs.
He slowley moved his hand around until it came
to rest on her love mond.
There he would try and see if he could find the
spot of G.
He says to her you are my greatest treasure,today
we start your erotic pleasure.

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Published on Sunday, October 20, 2002.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Six-Out On Wednesday, June 30, 2004, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    AND THENNNN!!!!!!!?!?!?!

  • glasshouse On Wednesday, June 30, 2004, glasshouse (548)By person wrote:

    Exactly. Well said. lol. Nice piece hun. -Glass

  • DarkPaladine On Friday, July 2, 2004, DarkPaladine (15)By person wrote:

    My Dear young Lady I am so glad that you enjoyed this poem of mine.I hope that you can see that what I was trying to get at is that love is both pain and pleasure and that life can be an erotic pleasure

  • murder_in_clubland On Wednesday, June 30, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    Gorgeous.. ireally like this.. i myself don't really like hot wax but hey whatever floats your boat~ss

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