sailed away

By thinevoicetragic

sailed away
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Washed my face of filth and disgrace::
Looked in the mirror and saw things a little bit clearer::
Looked in my eyes and realized what a mistake::


Hiding behind a false smile::
I now know it means indenial::
Broken heart::
Shattered dreams::
Like a shooting star it went too fast::
It traveled Far::



you told me you were here to stay::
But in time you disappeared through the clouds-
and sailed away::

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Copyright 2004 thinevoicetragic
Published on Tuesday, October 5, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: mmm i too feel this. very real to me, and so very well put.

  • Zhee On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    this was really sad...very well done.

  • capt_funguy On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    awwww ... sweet write ... realization episode , wake up to the sound of jerky little cellos ... stop the violins ... stop the violins! ... lol ..very cool....funguy

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