This poem will confuse you
By xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx
Dancing,
Dancing around this world despised of all that comes,
CARING, FALLING, TOUCHING, BLEEDING!
Distance in my way,
Everything seems like a blow-up scene,
It's dancing,
Then falling down,
COUNT ON ME!
TELL ME YOU NEED IT!
Books, knowledge,
WHAT IS THIS?
It's the PAST, PAST, PAST, PAST!
Erased, fallen and I can't escape,
Erase me in your chalkboard world,
Take me over, leaving the remains on the floor,
Chalkdust sticking to your feet,
Listening...,
To the sounds that never sleep,
They never sleep,
Tonite we try but everyday keeps getting harder,
Everyday it just keeps getting even more pointless,
Like to wash your hands after lust when you just keep coming back for more,
WHY IS THIS?
WHY in this world WE CRY?
WHY in this world WE FALL?
WHY TAKE ON THIS WORLD OF THE DESPISED?
Comments on "This poem will confuse you"
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A former member wrote:
wow... we are quite similar... me= 15 yr old who love manson, NIN and especially coffe and cigarettes... lol, well, just wanted to say hi.
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A former member wrote:
not as confusing as it first seems. haven't read much like this though lol, great write.
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On Monday, October 4, 2004, FallenFaith
(44) wrote:
the only that confuses me is your name. it is way too long for my american attention span.
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On Monday, October 4, 2004, darkangelXlll
(107) wrote:
i like it and i like the format that you put it in very interestin nice write.. i like it! ~darlin :D
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A former member wrote:
actually, to me it made alot of sense. i thought that was excellent. i'm going to print it out and hang it on my door or something. `used to be beautiful`
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On Monday, October 4, 2004, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
I didn't think it was very confusing...it's more of the "in the eye of the beholder" If I take it for being some apocalyptic realization, then that's what it will be...for me at least. Great write *~seraph~*