A love that was never there.

By thinevoicetragic

In your eyes I lost my soul,
now it feels as if I am no longer full.
Empty inside No way to fill the void.
Feels as if there is no one worthy to share my love.
Nothing good can come of this seems as if I am barring a
weekness.

Betrayed and Cheated.
comstantly Incompleted.
A
Love that was never there.
A
Lover that never cared.

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Copyright 2004 thinevoicetragic
Published on Monday, October 4, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: those first three lines crushed me. been here... i'm still trying to find my way out. extraodinarily put, well written indeed.

  • DarkWolf On Saturday, October 9, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    What a lonely feeling.. beautifully expressed.. -Michael

  • dark faery On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, dark faery (28)By person wrote:

    i realy tuely feel what your saying. I ve been going through alot and feel the same

  • capt_funguy On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    sweet temporary tragic .. tragic ... dug the ending run ,... catchy and complete .... funguy

  • Krusifire On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, Krusifire (13)By person wrote:

    Nice poem...I've felt this way alot. ~Fire~

  • Zhee On Monday, October 4, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    this was so sad.. very well written..

  • elisa On Monday, October 4, 2004, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    oh sweetie, this just hurts to read from you...you have such a way of expressing yourself...it's been to long since we've talked:( elisa

  • Angst Queen On Monday, October 4, 2004, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    these feelings are all too often felt. great write

  • Revolting Theatre On Monday, October 4, 2004, Revolting Theatre (31)By person wrote:

    nice write "Betrayed and Cheated." -ain't that always the case...-Josh

  • A former member wrote: breath taking....i think that everyone must feel this from time to time...unless the have invented some kind of brain surgery that prevented you from feeling...wouldnt that be great

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