Anymore

By dark faery

I feel so hurt I feel so sad
When I think of the times we had.
You were here then you were gone.
And you just left me dragging along.
When you came back hear I just wanted to hold you near.
Now my heart is so broken, so empty, so all alone.
I thought you were different but your not.
You lied to me and thought you'd never get caught.
When I found out my life turn more inside out.
I never felt this for anyone before.
I will always love you forever and more.
I just cant take this any more...

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Copyright 2004 blbhd
Published on Wednesday, September 29, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • PointlessX On Thursday, September 30, 2004, PointlessX (36)By person wrote:

    This poem is short and not so sweet...i can really relate to it...it sounds like my poem "My Stranger"--great job--PointlessX

  • FallenFaith On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, FallenFaith (44)By person wrote:

    I agree with the crazy person that commented before me. I was told not to rhyme, and i tried it. I hated it, but u can express things much more freely. Good work I look forward to more.

  • Soulseeker On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, Soulseeker (108)By person wrote:

    Okay.. I was once told that rhyming was okay but you have to watch the schemes... I really think that you should apply that here. It is a concept we all go through but sometimes rhyming makes it hard to express things that's unique. Bethany

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