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Living
By xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx
I hate myself today,
Memories will be a thing that will soon fade away,
I can't escape,
Can't be myself because I lost touch of reality.
Twist of pain,
Can't escape it, aspirin will be gone again,
Never to begin,
Wallow in this life you will take away.
Need to isolate,
Begin this torture to make me wear away,
A grudge of hate,
Don't want to review this worthless taste.
I can't breathe,
My life is complex and suffocating...,
me, I cannot see,
Maybe life is taking over everything.
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Copyright 2004 xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx
Published on Friday, September 24, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
The way you have expressed your emotion couldn't have been better. This truly wrenched my weak heart. ~*~ Rose ~*~
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A former member wrote:
...wow..and only 15...writing better than me...simply great....what the hell happened to the ninja turtle playin, bubble gum chewin, tree climbin kids i use to know and be?...keep writin ~MEUC~
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, MyScarsStillBleed
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wrote:
HRH you are beautiful and so is your poetry
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On Sunday, September 26, 2004, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
Intriguing, it did. The last line is realy great. It realy say alot; and you made me smile also. The build up to the end is surprising. Rare even, and I can say I relate.
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On Sunday, September 26, 2004, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
Yes, I am melancholic to the core that I smile of this. But it does not mean I do not feel it. Great work. -Tiger-
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On Saturday, September 25, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
I think no matter who you are.. we've all been there... very well expressed. this says everything.
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