Things I love to Hate about you.

By ashottothetemple

I can't stand the thought

Of your smile, that grin

Being the last thing I see


I can't stand your mirror

It's cold harsh truth

Staring back at us tonight


I hate your love for this

The filthy things we do

Your breath on my neck


You stare at my scars

I despise that too

You make me feel repulsive


I hate you once more

You make me feel

Like my old self again

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Copyright 2004 spirett
Published on Saturday, August 21, 2004.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • BeautifullyRuined On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (94)By person wrote:

    This was different.I loved the ending.

  • bloody LOVEly On Friday, January 21, 2005, bloody LOVEly (86)By person wrote:

    its sort of like a wall that will never let us be happy, like all we can do is hate everything. but its not all like that...

  • K_Love On Monday, August 30, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    I like it, very different from anything I've ever read. I like originality it stands out among crowds. Awesome write. ~Kirsten~

  • A former member wrote: Brandon, this is superb...probably one of your best...evocative, indeed. Much Love.

  • A former member wrote: anger is a good thing. killer work.

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