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Things I love to Hate about you.
By ashottothetemple
I can't stand the thought
Of your smile, that grin
Being the last thing I see
I can't stand your mirror
It's cold harsh truth
Staring back at us tonight
I hate your love for this
The filthy things we do
Your breath on my neck
You stare at my scars
I despise that too
You make me feel repulsive
I hate you once more
You make me feel
Like my old self again
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Copyright 2004 spirett
Comments on "Things I love to Hate about you."
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On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, BeautifullyRuined
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wrote:
This was different.I loved the ending.
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On Friday, January 21, 2005, bloody LOVEly
(85) wrote:
its sort of like a wall that will never let us be happy, like all we can do is hate everything. but its not all like that...
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On Monday, August 30, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
I like it, very different from anything I've ever read. I like originality it stands out among crowds. Awesome write. ~Kirsten~
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A former member wrote:
Brandon, this is superb...probably one of your best...evocative, indeed. Much Love.
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A former member wrote:
anger is a good thing. killer work.
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