Dormitory Killings
By TheReap
Don't fall asleep at night
Something's just not feeling right
Lock the windows, lock the doors
Or you'll sleep for ever more
Pull the sheets up to your head
Lying motionless in your bed
You hear footsteps at your door
Now you won't sleep anymore
Dormitory killings, Take you away
Dormitory killings, Take you away
Now you hear the ringing of your phone
Don't you wish that you were not alone
The times a little after four
There is someone knocking at your door
You wish that he would go away
But the killer's here to stay
He's about to break down the door
Cause the psycho's rotten to the core
Dormitory killings, Take you away
Dormitory killings, Take you away
He's coming at you with a knife
He's come to take away your life
He rapes you of your innocence
Against him you have no defense
He leaves your bloody body on the floor
As he makes his way through the door
He managed to make it away all right
To kill another victim some other night
Dormitory killings, Take you away
Dormitory killings, Take you away
Comments on "Dormitory Killings"
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A former member wrote:
Very creepy, very awesome. I liked the rhythm, reminded me of that one poem from Nightmare on Elm Street- "One, two, Freddy's coming for you, three, four, better lock your door..." and so on.
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On Monday, April 24, 2006, Guttercat
(30) wrote:
Wicked stuff, the idiosyncrasies of youth... or are we ever too old?
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On Monday, April 24, 2006, Nail Bunny
(161) wrote:
that is pretty damn good... creepy... but well done all the same
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A former member wrote:
Yes,creepy,mind grasping.Keep it up!!
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On Sunday, August 15, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
i love the flow of this & its twisted words... i'm stumbling uppon brutal stuff today this here is some more! wwell done *669*
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On Saturday, August 14, 2004, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
real creepy Reap - real creepy - but well written
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On Thursday, August 12, 2004, TheReap
(38) wrote:
This and my other submissions were probably written 15+ years ago.