Violence
By ashottothetemple
Burts of violence
Wrong place
Wrong time
My wrath unleashed
Puny bones
ShAtTeReD
Beneath a hammer
Jagged Gashes
SlIcEs AcRoSs
Limbs and waistlines
It's not mutilation
It's plastic surgery
Hide my skin
Beneath my scars
Rest in pieces
Bittersweet symphony
Of crushed marrow
Of Violence
Of Violence
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Copyright 2004 spirett
Comments on "Violence"
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A former member wrote:
mind numbing and very well spoken
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A former member wrote:
wow... thats intense... makes me think... great work
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A former member wrote:
intense indeed, great stuff. a slice through the mind.
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A former member wrote:
You paint a scene well...this left me sort of overwhelmed with a not-so-nice taste in my mouth...well done.