Trap

By Soulseeker

Broken peices, shattered heart;
the love in life fell apart.
Out of the dream, into reality;
torn away from the "in love" mentality.
Hope is lost in the sun's burning fire,
now dressed in black attire.
questions float in a cloud,
failing to make me feel proud.
Annoying things that you said,
linger aimlessly in my head.
Passive eyes passing by,
do they even hear the cry?
Here I sit staring straight,
hoping sanity doesn't come too late.
What is this trap I have found here?
Should I learn to love or continue to fear?
The moon has cast a speel or maybe a curse,
and forgot to put my heart's sake first.

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Copyright 2004 Soulseeker
Published on Friday, July 23, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Love and hope can be a trap. Those 3 words are just four letter ones. :-) ~Shane~

  • sixsixnine On Friday, August 6, 2004, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    vey nice again i can feel the longing for true love in your piece you express & capture that very well *669*

  • A former member wrote: I love your writting style and I agree I believe we have a lot in common too

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