Blood Over a Kiss

By Vindicated_untouchable

The blood trickles
From the open wound
Sweet warm and thick
It fascinates me
As it streams down the torn flesh
A drop spills on the floor
Its been wasted

Saliva gathers on my tongue
I cannot tear my eyes away

Another drop wasted

My eyes long like a hungry child
That watches a meal jettisoned
Burning with envy
Desire boiling inside
A need like one needs air to live, to survive
Unaware of my surroundings
Unaware of everything
Consciousness drifting away
The blood flows down
I want to stop it
To stop my suffering
Oh, the temptation
So close

Another drop wasted

~ForgottenFlame~

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Copyright 2004 ForgottenFlame
Published on Saturday, July 10, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • AniDayz On Wednesday, January 26, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    ditto to AC

  • scorpionstale On Sunday, July 11, 2004, scorpionstale (21)By person wrote:

    Wow, I know this feeling all too well, and you make it seem just as beautiful as it is to me. Its sad that there's only one way to be able to write about this type of bloodlust with your ammount of passion. Keep writing-ST

  • Alacer_Cogitatus On Saturday, July 10, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (140)By person wrote:

    blood is very precious and should never be wasted. A_C

  • Deadly Embrace On Saturday, July 10, 2004, Deadly Embrace (41)By person wrote:

    The decription on this is very well. nicely done -DE

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