Persist and anxiety
By Jadednoir
Feeling the weight of
a lost destiny
Resting between persistance and anxitey
feeling the weight on the chest again
swallowing sorrows
the feelings of a fragile fate
only within the persistance and possiblility
Feel the sting of realization
revelations that there are signs
of persistance
to compell us
of this lost destiny
I'm reaching to wake
When everyday is exactly the same
its a bit difficult to take a breath
remind yourself that theres
always one more day again
to try and change the grain
from which you cut
reminded of all those pasts
and still, through and through
remains bled and seeping
tries to suppress it
still it keeps reminding me
to reach to the waking light
for it to keep me alive
still for that change i strive
Reminds me of some lost hope
of recalling what i'm waiting for
when everyday is exactly the same
without it.
A human Error
A human error awakes me
still sleeps peacefully and he,
Is a human error,
to be not in his place
to face what still awaits
he is a human cringing desperately
done pondering the weakness
his strength in fatality
Silve coins at two and eleven
so what if the tale isn't true
Unhonest such as he
A human error awaits for clarity
Still at a loss for words:
Still something about the way you find a way to speak your mind
and it finds its way along my side
after it clashes in a fragile fate
Where I am destined to never face
the calling
Somehow I'll find a way to forget you
Somehow It seems as if your my catalyst
And you encourage me to compose a dream based
on vanity
yet i am nothing but in search of
a way to unify my senses
Scales, feathers
siren of lustrous
harpoons and then she scaled you as a slave for
tempting fate
Scales, feathers
Comments on "Persist and anxiety"
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On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Such great wording you used. I can definately respect a display of vocabulary. Some just can't write with decent words. You do it so beautifully. :) Great write ~*~Tart~*~
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On Tuesday, July 6, 2004, gracefullytorn
(61) wrote:
I love it..especially the line purr_verse singled out. Very nice.
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On Tuesday, July 6, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
this is great! many excellent lines but i'm going to single out "And you encourage me to compose a dream based on vanity" because that's just supergreat... :) i could get lost in these words repeatedly. fine write.