Persist and anxiety

By Jadednoir

Feeling the weight of
a lost destiny
Resting between persistance and anxitey

feeling the weight on the chest again
swallowing sorrows
the feelings of a fragile fate
only within the persistance and possiblility

Feel the sting of realization
revelations that there are signs
of persistance
to compell us
of this lost destiny

I'm reaching to wake

When everyday is exactly the same
its a bit difficult to take a breath
remind yourself that theres
always one more day again

to try and change the grain
from which you cut

reminded of all those pasts
and still, through and through
remains bled and seeping

tries to suppress it
still it keeps reminding me
to reach to the waking light
for it to keep me alive
still for that change i strive

Reminds me of some lost hope
of recalling what i'm waiting for
when everyday is exactly the same
without it.








A human Error

A human error awakes me
still sleeps peacefully and he,
Is a human error,
to be not in his place
to face what still awaits

he is a human cringing desperately
done pondering the weakness
his strength in fatality

Silve coins at two and eleven
so what if the tale isn't true

Unhonest such as he
A human error awaits for clarity


Still at a loss for words:
Still something about the way you find a way to speak your mind
and it finds its way along my side
after it clashes in a fragile fate

Where I am destined to never face
the calling

Somehow I'll find a way to forget you
Somehow It seems as if your my catalyst
And you encourage me to compose a dream based
on vanity

yet i am nothing but in search of
a way to unify my senses

Scales, feathers
siren of lustrous
harpoons and then she scaled you as a slave for
tempting fate

Scales, feathers


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Copyright 2004 Jadednoir
Published on Tuesday, July 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Kinkypoptart On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Such great wording you used. I can definately respect a display of vocabulary. Some just can't write with decent words. You do it so beautifully. :) Great write ~*~Tart~*~

  • gracefullytorn On Tuesday, July 6, 2004, gracefullytorn (61)By person wrote:

    I love it..especially the line purr_verse singled out. Very nice.

  • purr_verse On Tuesday, July 6, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    this is great! many excellent lines but i'm going to single out "And you encourage me to compose a dream based on vanity" because that's just supergreat... :) i could get lost in these words repeatedly. fine write.

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