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Slip-Stream
By Chalin
8,000 miles away.
I stood and stared inside.
everything was there,
but i knew it was
Gone.
Lost somewhere between
latex and rollercoasters.
i should retrieve
your legacy,
i should reclaim it.
But i have swallowed spikes
and intelligent conversation.
the words get lost inside.
Thought slips through the
punctured stillness of my
mind.
they take the form of tears,
i sing to you this way.
how everything is gone
and nothing will remain.
I feel so invisible.
mostly lost and invincible.
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Copyright 2003 Chalin
Published on Tuesday, February 4, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
This gave me a strong sense of being seperated from reality. Almost like waiting to rejoin the world after a coma, hrm. Interesting read. ~Ship!
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On Wednesday, February 5, 2003, CharlottesWeb
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wrote:
I can not place a single thought on what it is this poem is making me feel. Maybe...distant...seperated from what was, what will never be reclaimed from expereince and life...Wow, this was good!
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