The Tears Keep Flowing

By Angel With The Scabbed Wings

They said he had friends,
but they neglected the projector
and left him for better.
He noticed the seams
of these perfect creations,
then led himself to believe
that magic was real,
and that dreams could come true.
Left alone in abundance,
his sits and he ponders.
Why does he let his emotions Rule over
what he believes is right,
what he believes what is just.
Crawling alone in the room made of crimson,
he cries.
for he has been lured
into another commitment,
into another entrapment.
Ripping at himself,
no one stops,
no friends are there to help.
He just sits alone,
waiting for the empty room to collapse.


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Copyright 2004 Angel With The Scabbed Wings
Published on Saturday, June 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Soulseeker On Monday, August 2, 2004, Soulseeker (108)By person wrote:

    This is my fav. one of yours. This is the most powerful peice I have ever read. I am serious too.... Your number one phsyco fan, Bethany

  • A former member wrote: This whole poem is just beautiful....he sits alone, waiting for the empty room to collapse...I'm drowning in your terrific words...keep it up

  • A former member wrote: I agree with DS, very good ending!

  • A former member wrote: This hit me like a brick...you've just described so beautifully a place i have been and know well...exceptional...I-S .Azz

  • A former member wrote: lol, I like the ending, Waiting for the empty room to colapse, Good Write,

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