Wonder Luck

By Angel With The Scabbed Wings

What if the sun refuses to rise?
Will there be chaos,
or will it be a subtle end?

As time eats away
the true sides of the truth
are exposed.

Will the sun rise again,
To show the same old side?
Or will The unexpected remain
to fulfil my curiosity?

We shall see now wont we?

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Copyright 2004 Angel With The Scabbed Wings
Published on Friday, June 25, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Soulseeker On Monday, August 2, 2004, Soulseeker (108)By person wrote:

    Wow you have a brillant train of thought... I am being sincere too... Bethany

  • A former member wrote: This poem really makes you think...i like it...we never know what will happen in this life....

  • missanthropic On Monday, June 28, 2004, missanthropic (26)By person wrote:

    everyday the end draws nearer...and i agree..."We shall see now wont we?"

  • Angel With The Scabbed Wings On Monday, June 28, 2004, Angel With The Scabbed Wings (40)By person wrote:

    you take these wors far toooooo literal. This truly has not a fucking thing to do with the sun. look past the words, oh great poets.

  • A former member wrote: we'd have about 8 hours to live because that how it's estimated that it would take all of the heat of earth to dissapate into space but anywas good write

  • A former member wrote: This is Weird, But good, I would never think to write a poem a bout the sun, Good Job

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