Hold On (To True Love)

By eternal despair

~To: Dawn and Nate Marsh~
I wrote this after listening to the song my sister (Dawn) got married to, they have recently broek up after being married in august 2003. i am greatly upset by it, and that song didnt help, yet it did help me to write and get out soem of the pain. the song was "hold on" by bif naked. i know this is a very sappy write, but it hurts so bad to see the best thing that has ever happened to ur big sister (not to mention the rest of my family) go away.

"Hold on to me, say you'll always love me..."
What ever happened to forever
I know you two were meant be together
Throuhg thick and thin
In sickness and in health
I know you love each other deep within
"...tell me anything you want."
What ever happened to sharing feelings
Why don't you try to work through
Love always prevails in the end
Don't brake this one rule
Find the love you used to share
"Hold on to me, say you'll never leave me..."
What ever happened to second chances
True love over broken hearts
These tears aren't just from my eyes
Cupid is crying because his proudest match broke
I know you're hurting, but please let it mend
"...promise that you will hold on."
Another broken promise of love
A promise held close by all
My eyes are shielded by a wall of sorrow and fear
I'm scared its over for good
Don't let your hearts give up, they need each other
"You're the only one that will always be there"
What ever happened to true love
The only couple I ever beilieved in
What ever happened to the love I saw
The love in both sets of gazing eyes
You had me believing in love...

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Copyright 2004 eternal despair
Published on Saturday, May 22, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • sixsixnine On Saturday, May 22, 2004, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    indeed this was sad but just perfect* 669 *

  • nell On Saturday, May 22, 2004, nell (270)By person wrote:

    ahh man... this was sad...it's really good though you should show it to your sis=(

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