Can You See Inside?
By Midnight Shadow
I step back into the shadows,
As you study my face.
Can you really see the pain of
Memories that I can't erase?
I wear it on my face,
This fake, happy smile.
Let me be alone,
So I can frown for a while.
Yet you don't walk away,
You still stand there and stare.
Then you hold out your hands,
Are you pretending to care?
My knees slowly buckle,
As I break down and cry.
You look at me puzzled,
Then kneel beside me and sigh.
Picked me up so gently,
Carried me over to the bed.
Curled up at your side I sleep,
On your shoulder I rested my head.
I awake in the morning,
Feeling strong and refreshed.
I look over to see you next to me,
And I know I have truly been blessed.
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Copyright 2004 Midnight Shadow
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On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
Another light in the dark.. what a wonderful expression of love.. very well done again.. you are very talented.. -michael
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On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
the fake happy smile...i have used those words to try to explain myself to someone before....I find that you do a truly wonderful job of capturing thos feelings we all have, just some wont admit to.
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A former member wrote:
Very nice...it rhymed and everything...what more could a fellow poet ask for in reading her comrade's work? Nothing, I tell you, nothing.
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
"I wear it on my face, This fake, happy smile." I know that all too well. Nice write! ~Kirsten~
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A former member wrote:
wow, very uplifting, and excellent use of contrasts
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A former member wrote:
I really liked this poem. It has a nice meaning to it your a very talented writer dont let it do to waste.
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2004, girlafraid
(479) wrote:
wow i like the total transition in this from the painful sadness to the happiness at the end...good work...*girly*
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2004, GothBear
(13) wrote:
great emotions flow like water Loved it!!!!!
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
hmm... i like it .. bitter sweet**669**