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In Remembrance
By _Andrew_
Happiness;
A bliss, and like all others an ignorance
Look upon your hands from your knees knowing this day was to be eternally
yours
ending in regret.
depression;
slavery;
for one day, you could have had it all
selling your soul;
in remembrance of me...
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Copyright 2004 _Andrew_
Published on Thursday, May 6, 2004.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "In Remembrance"
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A former member wrote:
I belive the "seeling your soul" part was qute amazing. You made that line so perfectly because it brought our attention to how powerful the meaning was and how much this person wanted to remember you
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A former member wrote:
I love your style...it's very unique..the last lines sold it for me, as well.
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On Wednesday, May 12, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
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wrote:
yea dude.. ending took me flying. good stile you got going here.. *thumbs up*
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On Thursday, May 6, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
I really like the third line... I had to read it a couple of times and the flow and rhythm of it is marvellous.
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