A Ghost Walking

By Midnight Shadow

I walk across the ground,
Yet my feet do not touch.
You look straight at me,
But you do not see me.
I cry beside a lake,
My tears never hit the water.
I cry out in fear to you,
The wind refuses to carry my call.
My hand reaches out for you,
Yet your skin offers no resistance.
Cold suddenly as you sense my presence,
I shake my head sadly as you shrink back in fear.
I move away, sad and alone.
Running outside, I stop for nothing.
Standing in the pouring rain shivering,
Yet I am warm and dry.
Why am I being treated like this?
It's almost as if I'm a ghost.

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Copyright 2004 Midnight Shadow
Published on Monday, May 3, 2004.     Filed under: "Spiritual" and "Poetry"
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  • DarkWolf On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    Haunting.. very well done.. leaves me wondering the rest of the story.. -Michael

  • Lord Kalgalath On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (182)By person wrote:

    Always calling never heard, always grasping never to hold. very well done….

  • BleedSilver On Thursday, May 6, 2004, BleedSilver (298)By person wrote:

    To grasp but never hold, To listen, but never be told...Solid, but forever pallid...The life of a ghost is hard...And to feel like a ghost is even worse...~Mikey

  • A former member wrote: I definitely prefer this over your more 'forceful' works, I like the ebb and flow of it

  • A former member wrote: It really is haunting, as Tim said...very nice.

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