Death of a Withered Lover
By Angel With The Scabbed Wings
I watch a tear
fall down her face.
The liquid marbles run past her grin.
I just watch, emotionless
There is nothing I can say,
My wisdom has run dry
I killed,
I ripped apart the only thing I loved,
I fled for refuge.
Along with my return,
I bring a storm of sorrow.
I try to comfort her
but she Ignores my Ignorance,
and she walks down the hall.
As I follow her
I notice the cuts on her arms
she has destracted her pain from me for a moment.
The eerie feeling in the air
screams at me for I will kill
I watch a tear
fall down her face.
The liquid marble runs past her grin,
I just watch, emotionless.
There is nothing I can Say
My wisdom has run dry.
She sits in the bath tub.
as each tear hits the smooth surface
she greaves louder and louder
she gave one last look to me
and slices a line up her forearm
ripping the skin it two
as she looks for her soul in her wound
she can see that I have devoured it.
As the blood drains from her body
I can only think about what I have done.
I am my worst villain.
Now that my wisdom has run dry
so has she.
Comments on "Death of a Withered Lover"
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A former member wrote:
dont know what to say...only know what this makes me feel...ill be praying for u guys...
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On Friday, May 21, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
this is the best piece ive read of yours so far. your writing skills far surpassed mine. excellent work on this piece. :)
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On Friday, April 30, 2004, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
I don't usually like or comment on cutting/suicide poems but you present a moral here...never toy with ones freely given love...or emotions..Welcome to DP Indeed...Sit a spell and have a beer or two..*Velvet*
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On Saturday, May 1, 2004, Angel With The Scabbed Wings
(40) wrote:
this isnt nessasaraly about cutting its more of a story of past and confronting the present. The cutting was only dranatic affect, haha. anyway thanks alot for the support It means alot to hear that my work is enjoyed.
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A former member wrote:
This is beautiful. i loved the ending. It was so depressing. Welcome to Dp
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, hopeless
(51) wrote:
oh my... *shivers*... this was... donno how to explain it.... ~hopeless
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, IceDragoness
(193) wrote:
chilling and painful, it makes me think of the things in life i feel guilty about, welcome to dp, you'll do fine here ~Dawn
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A former member wrote:
I love how you ended this...it's just perfect to sum the poem up. Very nice.