Rage

By Despairing Eyes

Watch as I stand with my head held high
Watch and wait for my gun to rise
Watch as I put you in my sights
Watch the bullet go shooting by
Back behind you stands your best friend
Now you turn and see a bullet in his head
You turn back around and see me cocking the trigger
You watch in horror as your girlfriend draws nearer
You watch the gun aimed at her head
I fire a shot now she's dead
I turn back to you then I take aim
With rage in my eyes you hear me proclaim
Never bump into me when I'm having a bad day

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Copyright 2004 Despairing Eyes
Published on Sunday, April 25, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • K_Love On Sunday, April 25, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Hmm.. interesting, I'll be sure to come by you when I wanna die. (just kidding) Awesome write, originality flowed all through this poem, keep it up! ~Kirsten~

  • A former member wrote: Haha, just enough daily homocide I needed for today. Makes me wonder... how could you? How could you forget to kick him afterwards? =-MO-=

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