Rose Petals

By Chameleon

I have not been one to adore to adore the rose,
it reminds me how quickly
the dismembering caress of man
brings death in the face of love.

You can't help but notice their bloody heads
outstretched to taste the light,
outside the market where they are picked again.

Covered in a clear raincoat,
they travel in sweaty palms to new loves' delight;
only a knock on the door interrupts the short journey home.

A smiling face invites the rose into her heart,
which lies warm from the hearth and dim, dish-reflected candlelight.

The rose droops over its glass coffin, falling
to the last wax dripping sun
which wavers in lovers' rhythmic motion of night.

By morning, the tablecloth, stained with the mess
of spilt wine and rose petals, is removed.

Love again, wilted with the rose.

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Published on Saturday, May 11, 2002.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • slow.burn.star On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, slow.burn.star (84)By person wrote:

    everything wilts -love. everything. ~vicious

  • Liz On Thursday, September 25, 2003, Liz (265)By person wrote:

    I've read lots of poetry about roses, but never like this. Very truthful.

  • Bluegirl On Saturday, September 13, 2003, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    "love again, wilted with the rose" I just love that line, wonderful poem. ::skips off to read more of your work::

  • A Velvet Tongue On Monday, August 18, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434)By person wrote:

    The last line, stabbed me..how quickly it can truly fade away, surely as quickly as it comes...

  • A former member wrote: How easily you capture this moment in time you are a magican

  • A former member wrote: you puzzle me, Love that!:}669

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