Broken

By Anoblechicken

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push pins enter skin
the spiders crawl through the walls
no more emotion
screams in hand
pounding
rushing
....breath...
[nothing escapes]

weak

why do i feel??
empty

pitter patter
the rain falls
feel the rain
can't anymore

It only burns out my eyes
Let them burn
Let them be blined

These bruises so blue
They never go away...

[When will it stop hurting]

Sirens rewind time
and I'm broken

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Copyright 2004 Anoblechicken
Published on Sunday, April 11, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: AWW how deep yet a lil sad...I could give ya a hug to make u feel beta =o)

  • K_Love On Monday, April 12, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    depressing and deep, I love it!! Awesome write, I feel like whis sometimes, great job ~Kirsten~

  • WinterGrave On Monday, April 12, 2004, WinterGrave (258)By person wrote:

    this is dark and gloomy, mosy enjoyable read.~~~Grave

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