Fallen Angel

By Bloody_Hands

Black shadows cradle your soul so near
Against you heart you feel the fear
Held from above gods hold you high
Fall from their love and learn to lie
Look upon our world of hate
Taste the bitterness you were too late
Angered storms bleed from every pour
Take my hand you are my whore
Teach me how to torture all
Show your hate before you fall
Angels of white turned to demons of black
Once you have entered you cannot turn back
Flowing cloths now ripped and torn
Protect the life for which you are sworn
Feel your thoughts slip away
Eternal torment you will pay
So much pain forever cry
Death is here so now you die

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Copyright 2004 Bloody_Hands
Published on Wednesday, March 24, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • icebat On Monday, May 1, 2006, icebat (3)By person wrote:

    very good, i love the imagery, this is one of my favorites so far

  • yslehc On Thursday, March 25, 2004, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    wow awsome job with this, great rhyming too.. definitely a favorite

  • Bloody_Hands On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, Bloody_Hands (20)By person wrote:

    Thanx I love this one too

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