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Nightmare
By Blacken_Heart
"Nightmare"
The sun is gone
The lights are out
I can hear screaming
I can hear a shout
The walls are thin
As paper sick
So much screaming
It makes me sick
Closeing my ears
Holding my breath
Hope to be gone
My final death
Grab the razor
Oh soo tight
So I bleed
Throught the night
Take a breath
Deep and slow
Just see how
Red rivers flow
A soul is gone
A love is lost
But hey whatever
It's at there cost.
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Copyright 2004 Blacken_Heart
Published on Monday, January 26, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Nightmare"
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A former member wrote:
You are a very expressive person and this poem brings that out!
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On Wednesday, January 28, 2004, Drea
(1443)
wrote:
i agree with Wish. It had a good flow. Some strong lines. ~Drea~
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A former member wrote:
"The sun is gone..The lights are out..I can hear screaming..I can hear a shout" Some great lines here and it flowed so well.. I love this. ~Wish Upon A Star
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On Saturday, January 31, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I agree with both Wish and Drea. This is great and powerful
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