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poeticly suicidal
By eternal despair
tears of an unknown cause on my cheek
suicidal with out intentions
i just feel so alone
all i have is my poetry
so tonight my suicide is in verse
no note to tell why you
for i do not know myself
as i close my eyes and dream
i see the blade slide down my arm
and the blood dripping slowly
drinking from my arm
i swallow a few random pills
the slices turn to gashes
blood pures freely
a few more pills injested to ensure death
my blood has an exqusit taste
taste... my last sense
as i fade away from myself
i kiss my once crimson lips
farewell my friend
now i close my book
lay down my pen
until another suicidal feeling comes
when i can write one more verse of death
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Copyright 2004 eternal despair
Published on Monday, January 19, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
I like that you say that you write about it only. That you get out your thoughts by writing. It makes the picture very clear.
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467)
wrote:
i like it, you like others expressing how you feel, but...why you, should be you why in the sixth line?
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, eternal despair
(66) wrote:
thanx for telling me that looks stupid ehhehee
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, eternal despair
(66) wrote:
thanc for the truth bud, ive been having soe trouble with writing lately but i feel a good one coming to me.
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
this sounds like a familiar write.. maybe it's becourse we see lots of these on dp.. but it wassent a bad write, just you know.. - not new ? - :o)
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, eternal despair
(66) wrote:
yea its new...
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
I know that it's anew write.. but this reminds me of I have a writers block write.. :o)
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, eternal despair
(66) wrote:
hmmmm kinda, but also i felt like shit lately just trying to get it out.
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
dont get me wrong.. I dident meen to say that i't suck.. I'm just being honest saying that i'm not realy impressed.. but hey, poetry is for the writer not the reader.. :o)
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