messy

By angel_eyes

look at the mess ive made...
there are clothes on the floor
dirt on the wall
half empty cans
dust collecting on the furniture
and you cant see the floor

look at the mess ive made...
there are secrets told
i opened my mouth
insults to friends
trust lost
and i cant see me anymore

look at the mess ive made...
there are deep dark secrets
i spread my legs
drank and inhaled
i betrayed my family
and im begining to fade
more and more

you cant see the floor
or me anymore
they call me a whore
the pain stings to the core
i just didnt want to be a bore
and you
TORE
TORE
TORE
me apart

Look at the mess ive made

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Copyright 2004 angel_eyes
Published on Wednesday, January 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • capt_funguy On Wednesday, January 14, 2004, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    thankyou for sharing this ... powerful writing ... funguy

  • yslehc On Wednesday, January 14, 2004, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    wow.. this is an awsome write.. what a horrible feeling to have..great job though

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