Freedom?

By no_independence

Why do we call ourselves free? WE AREN'T!!!!! And if you think you are you are sadly mistaken. We are punished for everything! If you smoke, do drugs or drink you are considered a criminal. Why should it be anyones fucking business what you do to yourself? Its doesn't effect their perfectly wrapped meaningless lives at all. They say they do it because they care about us, I say they do it so they can control us so we can one day be just like them. But your opinion is your own.


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Copyright 2004 no_independence
Published on Saturday, January 10, 2004.     Filed under: "Rant"
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  • Midnight Phoenix On Sunday, February 15, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    We aren't free, that's the truth. However, to be totally free would eventually be much much worse. Drugs and alcohol have been successfully tied to a LOT of problems in America.

  • Midnight Phoenix On Sunday, February 15, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    If people could be responsible and accountable for themselves, we could be free.For the time being, there's just too much greed out there.

  • no_independence On Sunday, February 15, 2004, no_independence (19)By person wrote:

    I can respect that view, but I believe it is a personal problem that people need to deal with on there own, and it shouldn't be dictated by others. ~no_i

  • physicalgraffiti On Sunday, February 15, 2004, physicalgraffiti (56)By person wrote:

    My only opion is that of complete agreement- - awesome

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    I agree with Methos... ...free country? ...yeah

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    I smoke and have never been considered a criminal.

  • no_independence On Friday, January 23, 2004, no_independence (19)By person wrote:

    Good For You!!!!! You've obviously never met my parents. (Lucky you!)

  • Drifter On Sunday, January 11, 2004, Drifter (268)By person wrote:

    Amen... Many aren't ready for freedom though. What are we to do with them?

  • Methos On Saturday, January 10, 2004, Methos (121)By person wrote:

    Portrayed like someone who is imprisoned..such emotions displayed here..good write...-Methos

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